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Brick by Brick
Stone by stone
The wall grows a little more
And I'm all the more alone


A window here
And a window there
To glimpse at the open fields
And pretend I'm not here


Now the roof appears
I'm all closed in
Time to say goodbye world
And trap the thoughts within


2-12-10
something random that flowed out of my head and onto a scrap sheet of paper.

tools: me
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cheerbabe2001 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
that's really good. i really like that. short and simple yet to the point. i love it :D
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alyth3cat Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
Awe thanks! I appreciate that, but your piece was much more descriptive of the feeling. I enjoyed it.
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Alysy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010   Writer
its really good, and its how im feeling right now.

keep it up!
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alyth3cat Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010
I love when people can relate to my work! :D thanks!
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Alysy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010   Writer
anytime
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ZhaneAugustine Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
sad but many of us feel this way
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armymanski Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It is good. I have felt that way before a few times.
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alyth3cat Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
Thanks. ^.^
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